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Friday, February 21, 2014

Key Dates





Monday 2/29- Reading Quiz, page 301

Friday 2/28- Reading Quiz, end of book.
                               Typed up Gem Writing pieces due.

Monday 3/3- Rough draft of Extended Definition Due.

Tuesday- Wednesday/Friday 3/3- 3/7- Socratic Seminars.

Monday 3/10- Final Extended Definition Essay Due


Gem Writing #3



Now write a “Weems Weekly” post about Davis, only this time at least 10 of your 15 sentences must be written with passive voice.

You can either re-write your original writing piece, or you can write a new one.
 

Passive Voice



What is Passive Voice?
No, passive voice is not when shy people read Shakespeare in front of class.  Passive voice is a writing style. Although it is usually frowned upon when used, passive voice is not necessarily a bad writing technique.

Passive voice is when you make the object of an action the subject of a sentence. You are taking whoever or whatever is performing the action and no longer making it the main grammatical subject of the sentence. 

Why did the chicken cross the road? The chicken crosses the road.

“Chicken” is the subject of the sentence and the “road” is the object. How can we change the sentence so that “road” is promoted to the subject position?

            Why was the road crossed by the chicken? The road was crossed by the chicken.

Since it is the chicken that is the thing that is doing an actual action (crossing, the road just stays there), writers will tend to make it the actual subject of the sentence.

Why is Passive Voice Frowned Upon?
Writers in the social studies and humanities typically avoid passive voice because it harms the clarity of their writing. Instead of knowing what the subject of the sentence is right away, the reader instead has to read through a potentially confusing sentence to get to the point. Passive voice also is seen as a way for a writer to avoid any rigorous thinking in their sentences:

The working class was marginalized after the Tariff Clause of 1906 was passed by Congress.

When Congress passed the Tariff Clause of 1906, it marginalized the working class.

The Tariff Clause of 1906 marginalized the working class and caused Congress’s approval rating to fall sharply among immigrants and the poor.

By avoiding passive voice, you can add clarity to your writing and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topics you discuss.


When should I use passive voice?
Although the writers in the humanities discourage passive voice, scientific writing sometimes recommends it. The reason behind this is because passive voice can lead to an “objective tone” where the writer can completely avoid the first person (using “I” or “we”). This might be true in lab reports:

            Then we sequenced the human genome by the end of the process.
            The human genome was sequenced by the end of the process.

Still double check with your lab instructors as to what they prefer. Other reasons why passive voice might be more effective:

   1)    To emphasize an object: Friday is when the essay is due.

    2)     If you don’t know who the subject/ actor of the sentence is: The staplers have been stolen from my classroom.

    3)     If the readers don’t need to know who is responsible for the action: Baby Sophia was delivered at 3:30 am yesterday morning. We are so happy. (As opposed to the active voice: “Dr. Gwendolyn Looterback-Smoote delivered baby Sophia yesterday at 3:30 am. We are so happy”).

State whether the following sentences are active or passive, and then rewrite them and turn them into the opposite:

The bill was vetoed by the legislature.

Batman was defeated by Bane after the Bat Cave was blown up by grenades.

Superman kissed Lana Lang after saving the day yet again.

The snickers bar is being eaten by Evelyn at this very moment as the life story of Ninny is being told.

The students check the class blog every day in case there is extra homework they can do.

Extended Definition Essay



General Overview:
Choose one word or phrase and give it the proper essay-length definition it deserves. You will want to explore the meaning of this word in a way that promotes discussion and elaboration. Your word or phrase must have some connection with Fried Green Tomatoes at the Whistle Stop Café or A Good Man is Hard to Find.
The final due date will be March 10th.

Standards:
       I.            Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts, and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of content.

    II.            Develop the topic thoroughly by selecting the most significant and relevant facts, extended definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples appropriate to the audience’s knowledge of the topic.

Expectations:
·         You will need to decide what the purpose of your definition is. Do you want to add clarity to an abstract or foreign word? Do you want to add a personal commentary on a word that you believe is misused? Do you want to make use of a technical term? Do you want to provide the historical use of a term? Is it a recognizable term that simply needs a closer look?

·         You will need to use at least 2 nonfiction sources (articles, speeches, non-fiction books) when discussion your term or phrase. Remember that a dictionary definition does not count as a source (although you can use it in your essay if it helps to promote clarity or conflict with your term). Wikipedia also does not count as a source.


·         You will also need to make a specific reference to either work of fiction from the unit (Fried Green Tomatoes at the Whistle Stop Café or A Good Man is Hard to Find). It helps to make this fictional source a main idea of a body paragraph.

·         You can refer to yourself (think of this as an informal research paper)


·         This essay must be at least 2 ½ pages long with an additional works cited page or section added.

Monday, February 17, 2014

Socratic Seminars: Fried Green Tomatoes Style



   


    1)      Explore the topic of Race and Gender in the novel Fried Green Tomatoes at the Whistle Stop Café. How does Fannie Flag present the issue of racism in Fried Green Tomatoes? How does Fannie Flagg view the importance of the female voice in the novel? What might her message on these topics ultimately be? When coming up with questions and searching for textual support on these topics, consider the following:
a.      The town’s way of dealing with racism.
b.      The position of white people in the town and whether or not that changes.
c.       The position of black people in the south and whether or not that changes.
d.      Big George’s, Sipsey’s, and Onzell’s roles in the town.
e.      Artis and Jasper and how their journey may differ from Stump, Ruth, and Idgie.
f.        Clarissa and Naughty Bird and their journey in the story.
g.      How Idgie deals with institutional racism vs others.
h.     How Evelyn views issues of Race in the 1980s and how this may compare to the fifty years leading up to it.
i.        How women are treated in the families in the novel.
j.        Look at the different family units in the novel and discuss how the women play a role in each.
k.      How Evelyn views her role as a woman at the beginning of the book and at the end.
l.        How Idgie fits in the town of Whistle Stop as a strong female character.
m.   How the male characters in the novel view and treat women.
n.     How Ruth fits in the town of Whistle Stop and how she compares with Idgie.
o.      How Evelyn views the derogatory opinions of women prevalent in her society.
p.      How Fannie Flagg and Ken Kesey portray women differently.
q.      Whether or not the treatment/ portrayal of women has gotten better over time.

   2)    Explore the concept of moving on and accepting change / finality in one’s life. What is Fannie Flagg’s ultimate message in how one should accept change and finality? When coming up with questions and searching for textual support on this topic, consider the following:
a.      How Ninny views death vs. how the Grandmother views death in the short story A Good Man is Hard to Find.
b.      Evelyn’s reaction throughout the novel to the fact that she is going through menopause.
c.       How the South (Birmingham and Whistle Stop) accepts, or doesn’t accept, the changing attitudes towards race in the nation.
d.      How the different characters move on, or don’t move on, after traumatic life events.
e.      How different characters accept a loved one’s death.  Think about Smokey and Idgie’s reaction to Ruth’s death.
f.        How Jasper and Smokey accept the closing of the railroad yard and its greater symbolism.
g.      How Hamlet’s views on death compare to Ninny’s and Evelyn’s views.


   3)    Explore the categorization of Fried Green Tomatoes at the Whistle Stop Cafe as a literary genre. Ultimately, what is this novel? Local Color? Realism? Southern Gothic? When coming up with questions and searching for textual support on this topic, consider the following:

a.      What elements of Local Color do you see in the novel? Why does the author use them in that way?
b.      What elements of Realism are apparent in the novel? Why does the author use them in that way?
c.       What elements of Southern Gothic does the author incorporate into the novel? What is the author’s purpose in using these elements?
d.      What kind of novel do you think Fannie Flagg set out to write? Did she succeed?
e.      Which characters embody which literary movements, and how might their journeys in the book signify a greater message?
f.        How does this piece of Southern Fiction compare with the southern short stories we read during the unit?

What is a Socratic Seminar?
Students will be placed in one of two groups and will be given a specific topic for discussion in the Socratic Seminar. A Socratic Seminar is when a group of students (in this case 12) discuss a topic with one another in a respectful manner. Students bring up topics and present questions as others discuss different answers with textual support. It is not a debate, but a dialogue. From now till the Socratic Seminar, you will want to gather quotes, evidence, and examples that will better help you to understand your specific topic.

The Socratic Seminars will take place March 3rd-7th.
Your score will be a combination of …

§  your involvement in the discussion
§  the level of insight and textually based responses you provide
§  your prepared notes for the discussion (Three analytical or synthesis style questions and five quotes)
§  Your willingness to incorporate others into the discussion
§  Extra points will be allocated for professional attire