The most important part of your essay is the thesis
statement. Your thesis statement lays the framework for the rest of your paper.
When writing a thesis statement, consider the three P’s:
Prompt: is
your thesis actually addressing the prompt you have chosen to write on? Your
thesis must relate to the key concept in the prompt. For instance, if the
prompt asks about power and authority, then you need to reference power and
authority in your thesis.
Provable: You
need to be able to prove your thesis through textual support (examples and quotes).
Be sure they are worthy of being proven; for instance, it is not necessary to
prove that Lady Catherine is snobby since no one would disagree with you.
Purpose: You
should state why the author creates a situation or why he/she does what
he/she does. What is the purpose of the author’s writing? This is called
thematic purpose and should also reflect a major theme in the work. Purpose is
the most important part of your thesis. This should show how the message of the
novel is universal and goes beyond the author’s text.
All thesis statements must take some type of bold leap forward in making a claim
about the book or author. This is how you add purpose in your thesis
statement; it takes critical thinking on your part and the willingness to be
bold (like Indiana Jones). I can’t tell
you what the purpose of your thesis statement is! Only you can do that!
Example:
Fact: In Shakespeare’s play Hamlet, many characters attempt to
avenge the death of their loved ones to limiting degrees of success.
Elaborate Fact: In his play Hamlet, Shakespeare shows how both Hamlet, an overly-philosophical
prince, and Laertes, a man of rash action with little thought, both implement
flawed plans for avenging their fathers’ deaths.
Thesis Statement: In the play Hamlet, Shakespeare contrasts Hamlet’s
philosophical obsession with existence with Laertes’ temper and rash behavior to
demonstrate that regardless of its justification or execution, vengeance is
truly futile.
Remember, a good thesis statement
goes beyond the
text and becomes universal!